Can You Tell Me How It's Fair....new tune

LouisC

Venerated Member
Sounds great but I’m struggling with the lyrical intelligibility of the line
My heart, it’s Brocken …….. ……..
A ……. …….. …..?

I also think ‘roam’ in ‘you are free to roam’ gets a little lost.
 
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Wiz

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Sounds great but I’m struggling with the lyrical intelligibility of the line
My heart, it’s Brocken …….. ……..
A ……. …….. …..?

I also think ‘roam’ in ‘you are free to roam’ gets a little lost.
Thanks for checking it out and taking the time to comment, I’ll have a look into that
 

klasaine

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Really nice as always.
No real critique other than to say, “if I lived anywhere near you, I‘d wanna play in your band”.
 
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