Critics - Rap Instrumentals from Germany!

[Ro-McDo]

Hello everybody!

Here are links to some instrumentals I made in the past time.

http://www.ten01a.de/mp3/Prod.02.-.012.-.008_16Bit_Master1.mp3
http://www.ten01a.de/mp3/Prod02.2004.-.003.-.Mixdown.009_01.mp3
http://www.ten01a.de/mp3/Prod.01-2004.-.LR7.-.014neu_01.mp3
http://www.ten01a.de/mp3/Prod.02.-.008.-.Mixdown.von.016_bisschenMaster.mp3
http://www.ten01a.de/mp3/Prod.02.-.007.Mars.Attacks.-.016_master1.mp3
http://www.ten01a.de/mp3/Prod.01-2004.-.003.-.Mixdown_008_01.mp3
http://www.ten01a.de/mp3/Prod.-.018.Mobb.-.letzterMixdown.mp3

Maybe you could tell me if you hear any mistakes in the mixes or maybe you have some creative ideas what I could have done better. And, of course, you can tell me if you like them or not :wink:
By the way: there are not mastered (even if the title says so), so they sound different in frequency and loudness (some of the instrus I made a little bit louder with a maximizer, but that is all). So please keep that in mind.

Thank you very much and greetings from Germany!

Bye

Ronald

 

[tele]

I've listened to Number 1 to 4 of your list. Sounds like they are all usuable for RAP.
1 to 3 is just the same loop all the way? You need to do variations and breaks to breathe life into these.
I can't really comment on the mix, since they are intended for RAP - and Rap without vocals is like a symphony without classical instruments. It just can't be done. 8)
I like the feel of the 4th in the list.

Gruss

tele

 

[Ro-McDo]

Thanks, some more comments please? Maybe some on the sound and eventually mistakes in the mix...

 

[Bluna]

I just listend to nr 4 and its far too much bass. IT sounds good, but i guess it would blow away grandma's kitchen radio. So cutting and EQing would be wise.
LG