New song... feedback appreciated

Funky D

Member
Hi all,

Putting some final touches on a pop tune I've been working on... I played around with the demo of the space echo a LOT, but toned things down in the end :) First time I've played around with a lot of synths as well...

Vocs are a bit flat in places... I'll blame it on a bad headphone mix. Not grating on my ears, but I'm up for a second opinions.

http://www.firstflyingmachine.com/music/testflight.mp3

Thanks for looking!

Paul
 

Awesom-o

Active Member
Hi Funky D

If it was me i'd be doing the following:

1. Make the drums bigger. You could maybe leve them as they are for the verses, then when you get to the chorus WHAM! the drums really kick in.
2. Vocals - more variation in textures in the different sections of the song, eg dry and up close in verses, a bit whackier in the bridges (phasers/other modulation done subtely) then huge and three dimensional in the choruses. The chorus should really lift off when it arrives!
3. More instrumental contrast between sections to keep interest levels up and create more sense drama.

Hope this is helpful to ya.

Nice song btw!
 
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