song made in logic 7

[mersisblue]

http://home.comcast.net/~tedbecker2003/ ... sketch.mp3

any and all feed back appreciated



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[mersisblue]

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[tele]

What would like to be commented?
The theme is nice as far as it goes.
To be a complete song it's still missing some change, but it's still a sketch, so the future will show how it's gonna be, I guess.

tele

 

[mersisblue]

thanks

any comments are appreciate as long as they're sincere

Yeah I know it need something else...... still working on it